Feedback on project one

The critique about my project went a lot better than I thought it was going to go. I guess after watching the video over and over all you can see is whats wrong with it and what you make better with it but you can't do that because you do not have time to do it. The things people wanted me to fix were things I feel like I as well knew needed fixing. The one thing I did really think about was having the black and white part in a different color tone or something. Which I think its a great idea to go back and try it different ways. So I can pick the best one for the video. I know I need to work on lighting which is something you could tell in the project. But with time a practice I will get better.